The Official Writing Challenge
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Isn't it wonderful how God works?

I think that with less dialogue and more description, your readers would be better able to identify with your characters.

Very sweet ending.
I love that God placed Mary and Emma together. Thanks for bringing the plight of older children in the adoption system to the forefront.
Good job with this topic. God does work things out for all His children.
A little more "showing" and not so much "telling" allows the reader to feel more involved with the characters.
I loved this story. It caught me at the beginning and carried me all the way through. Thanks for writing this inspiring story.