The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
Great job with the authentic dialogue.

The end seemed a bit of a fizzle for me--just the last paragraph or so.

Wonderful message, important to all who at times feel hopeless about our small churches.
06/01/09
Oh my! These crusty characters sure have the dialogue and "discussion" down pat, don't they? I like the humor and the way you added the voice of reason at the end.
06/04/09
I love it that the men's group focussed on the needs of children - signs of the last days when the fathers' hearts return to the children. Go for it.