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Great job with the authentic dialogue.

The end seemed a bit of a fizzle for me--just the last paragraph or so.

Wonderful message, important to all who at times feel hopeless about our small churches.
Oh my! These crusty characters sure have the dialogue and "discussion" down pat, don't they? I like the humor and the way you added the voice of reason at the end.
I love it that the men's group focussed on the needs of children - signs of the last days when the fathers' hearts return to the children. Go for it.