The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
A very sad picture of a dysfunctional family.

I liked the note of hope at the end, but still felt as if it fizzled just a bit in the last quarter or so.

I was quite drawn to your teenage character--he was well-written.
How sad as too many scenario's like this actually happen. Believable characters. Good job!