The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
Love the title!

This is a good bit of characterization...I'd have enjoyed less of the telling of the story in his past, and more about his conversion and his present. Be careful of word usage; I caught several that weren't quite the right word.

Enjoyed very much your use of the topic concepts in this compelling story.
06/01/09
I also love this title and the concept that Christ moved into the man's heart like a "silent light". That is a beautiful expression of Grace.
06/04/09
Very good contrast of the light and dark voices. And Powerful content for a short story.