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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Retreat (as in quiet time away) (08/01/05)

TITLE: My Secret Closet
By Shonnah McGrew
08/03/05


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I enter into my secret closet to relax,
I go there at least once a day,
sometimes it's just to get away,
Other times I use it to pray,
when things start to go wrong,
I immediately go there to relax,
In the time of storm,
When rage and discuss wears me down,
I go there in order to escape to level ground,
Relaxation immediately comes in,
A clear understanding deep within,
I know when I reach my peak,
I feel strong I am no longer weak.


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Brandi Roberts08/09/05
Very nice! But you should have made it longer. Thanks for sharing!
Shelley Snyder08/09/05
Good poem. I wonder though if instead of using the word 'relax' or relaxation as many times (3), if you could have found a synonym for one of them...
Debra Brand08/10/05
Very comforting.
dub W08/11/05
Thanks for posting. Becareful with alternating styles in short poetry.