The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice! But you should have made it longer. Thanks for sharing!
Good poem. I wonder though if instead of using the word 'relax' or relaxation as many times (3), if you could have found a synonym for one of them...
08/10/05
Very comforting.
08/11/05
Thanks for posting. Becareful with alternating styles in short poetry.