The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
This is a unique combination of prose and poetry.

Be careful of 'it's'--it means 'it is' or 'it has'. When using the possessive, you want 'its' without the apostrophe.

I really like the way you incorporated the topic into your entry.
06/01/09
Many descriptive phrases to warn and exhort the believer to hold fast in these hard times.