The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
Good job with the meter and rhyme.

I wonder if some of the stanzas were a bit redundant?

This has a marvelous message of redemption.
05/28/09
Love this. With the simplicity of this topic, you were bold to chose this simple format - I believe. Your message is so true.
Good job!

This was my favorite part:

"Or the light of salvation,
Shining down from above.
Radiating upon us all,
God's perfect love."

Keep writing!
When we have once known the light and we wander...I think the darkness becomes even darker so that on return, the Light shines even brighter. I loved your poem, a great picture of Grace and redemtion