The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
This was very short--I'd love to have known why Chloe's heart was scarred.

A sapce between paragraphs, please?

I like the way you protrayed this nice relationship.
05/22/09
A wonderful example of how a relationship could grow if build on a foundation of prayer.
Aw, I wanted more-this piece had me interested in Chloe's situation. This was good, I just wanted to find out more about Chloe's past and maybe a little more development of relationship with Horatio. Well done. :0)