The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun update of Genesis, and I love the pun in the title.

I was thrown for a bit when you once refered to Adam as a man (the two men in the boat), and another time as a boy (getting into bed).

This was very visual--I got a kick out of it.
Great example of "the love of the Father is visited upon the Son." I liked the easy relationship between them. Good job.
I liked the love between the father and the son and wondered after the first paragraph if it was about God and Adam. I:0) I liked the way you had Evwe creeping into bed with a suprised Adam and the reply from their heavenly father. Godo job!!This gave me a grin. (I was just a little confused when the boy was referred to as a man but other than that this was cleverly written!!!:))