The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
I like the first 6 paragraphs very much--excellent at "showing, not telling". And I love the symbolism of your open window.
Yes, well done. I liked the symobolism too and was relieved that a family at church took the time to let the girl know that there were people who cared. So many times we don't take the time to initiate an introduction and welcome a visitor at church. Whether within the church or outside, we need to let other people know that there is hope,etc. Nicely written. :0))