The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
Clever! Imaginative, good imagery. Well Written. Great job!
05/21/09
Excellent POV!
05/26/09
I have never ever thought of the Fall from this point of view before!! Very original and creative. I loved it!
05/28/09
Very clever and congrats on your win and your EC! Way to go!
05/28/09
Unique POV and excellent writing.
05/28/09
Love your creative slant and the way you told this story. No wonder it's a winner. Congratulations on your EC!
05/28/09
Clever, witty, creative, clever, entertaining, great POV, clever. Did I mention this was clever? Congratulations on your well-deserved honor. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story.
05/28/09
What clever writing and creative take on the original sin that led to The Fall. Thumbs up to you and congrats on your EC win.
06/01/09
Sorry I'm so late to let you know that I loved your story and to congratulate you on your placement. Well done.