The Official Writing Challenge
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Clever! Imaginative, good imagery. Well Written. Great job!
Excellent POV!
I have never ever thought of the Fall from this point of view before!! Very original and creative. I loved it!
Very clever and congrats on your win and your EC! Way to go!
Unique POV and excellent writing.
Love your creative slant and the way you told this story. No wonder it's a winner. Congratulations on your EC!
Clever, witty, creative, clever, entertaining, great POV, clever. Did I mention this was clever? Congratulations on your well-deserved honor. I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story.
What clever writing and creative take on the original sin that led to The Fall. Thumbs up to you and congrats on your EC win.
Sorry I'm so late to let you know that I loved your story and to congratulate you on your placement. Well done.