The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
Cute POV, but it took me a while to figure out who 'she' was, and her age, and under what circumstances she was making these decisions.

I love your title, and the child's perceptions of the people she was thinking about.
05/24/09
I enjoyed this little story that very nicely shows the importance of even small decisions to a little child. Your descriptions of GeeJay's house made me want to go there myself! :) Good job!