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08/08/05
Very nice ending! Laughter is certainly a God-given getaway. Thanks for sharing!
08/08/05
We all need those Calgon moments, don't we, even if is only in our minds. Good writing!
08/10/05
Amazing how life is! So true.
08/11/05
Good imagery, break dialog and thoughts out to avoid confusion, a little structure and this is a good one.
08/11/05
Laughter is indeed medicinal! Enjoyed the reminder that the mind is the control panel of our lives - 'let this mind be in you which was in Christ Jesus.' Seemed there were some rough technical things that could be smoothed out, but the content is great. I liked this!
08/11/05
Amen to laughter! Good point!
08/12/05
This was funny. I think that the comments of the others re. spacing etc. would all be resolved if you preview your work, sentence by sentence, before you submit it.
08/14/05
Love the idea of laughter being the best retreat.
08/14/05
Thank you for sharing this memory. I love the humorous way in which you approached the topic. The ending was a surprise and so true. Best wishes with this piece.
08/14/05
Loved the laughter retreat!