The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/09
I enjoyed the authentic voice in your story.

You have "striping" in one place where you wanted "stripping", I think.

How blessed you are to have those precious grandchildren!
Could there be a greater gift on earth than to have children and grandchildren who love you? And one of them thinks your 33 - wow! A blessed life for sure. I like the read of your story very much.
This is good and i like your humor. I could relate to your MC about feeling old. I agree with the other comments.
How precious indeed are our children and I hear grandbabies are awesome. We're not there yet. I know I'm not ready to hear little ones call me grandma.
I think this year and when I was 20 were the hardest. At 20 I was feeling that I was no longer a teen ager and had to figure out what I was going to do with the rest of my life-I was very instrospective.
This year is different now I just feel like an old fart with a heart of a youngster.:0)))Again, nice piece!