The Official Writing Challenge
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Good writing--you brought me right inside this hurting woman's soul. Excellent example of "showing, not telling."
I loved your portrayal of someone attending a recovery meeting for the first time. Very insightful and I imagine very real. I enjoyed your words.
How touching and realistic. Your descriptions on even the woman's feelings and hesitated steps kept me feeling her anxiety and then a wave of relief. I'm glad that she found hope and a reassurance that she could face this and to her suprise not alone. Very well done. Nice job! :0)
Good writing that got right into the heart of the woman.
Very well done, you captured my interest from the very start, and held it through out the entire story.