The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Incredible! I loved this! A beautiful display of God's desire for us to turn to Him. Thank you VERY much for sharing!
08/08/05
Amen. Beautiful and awesome poem! I was blessed reading today. God bless ya, littlelight
08/08/05
What a lovely invitation from our Father God, "Beloved, Come Away." Thanks for sharing your talent.
08/08/05
A beautifully inspired poem drawing others to our Savior. Lovely.
08/10/05
Good rhyme and verse!
08/11/05
Some of the rhymes in couplets seemed contrived, but the meter held, good job.
Lovely thoughts, every one! I could feel the Father's desire to shelter me under His wing. :-)
Very nicely done.
A lilting and sensitive poem. Thank you!
08/12/05
You did a good job with this. It sounds like you have personally experienced the joy of surrender.
08/14/05
Beautiful. I love the theme through it all - the call to come away with Him. Well done.
08/14/05
Wonderful poem. I suggest you try and publish it. It is very inspirational. Good job!
08/14/05
This is a beautiful piece! The flow is perfect and the message is one that is refreshing as well as true.
Your poem is beautiful and anointed written as an invitation from the Lord to Come away with Him. I could really identify with it. God bless you from your sister in Christ, Marcell
My email address is marcellnian@westnet.com.au