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08/08/05
Wow! Incredible! I loved this! A beautiful display of God's desire for us to turn to Him. Thank you VERY much for sharing!
08/08/05
Amen. Beautiful and awesome poem! I was blessed reading today. God bless ya, littlelight
08/08/05
What a lovely invitation from our Father God, "Beloved, Come Away." Thanks for sharing your talent.
08/08/05
A beautifully inspired poem drawing others to our Savior. Lovely.
08/10/05
Good rhyme and verse!
08/11/05
Some of the rhymes in couplets seemed contrived, but the meter held, good job.
08/11/05
Lovely thoughts, every one! I could feel the Father's desire to shelter me under His wing. :-)
Very nicely done.
08/11/05
A lilting and sensitive poem. Thank you!
08/12/05
You did a good job with this. It sounds like you have personally experienced the joy of surrender.
08/14/05
Beautiful. I love the theme through it all - the call to come away with Him. Well done.
08/14/05
Wonderful poem. I suggest you try and publish it. It is very inspirational. Good job!
08/14/05
This is a beautiful piece! The flow is perfect and the message is one that is refreshing as well as true.
08/30/05
Your poem is beautiful and anointed written as an invitation from the Lord to Come away with Him. I could really identify with it. God bless you from your sister in Christ, Marcell
My email address is marcellnian@westnet.com.au