The Official Writing Challenge
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05/12/09
I enjoyed this! Very good descriptions. Giggled through much of it. Wally made the right chooice in this story. Well done!
05/13/09
I really, really liked this. I find it interesting how many FW contributers seem to be cat-lovers but this was a fitting tribute to man's best friend. Funny, imaginative with some great insights into human nature. One quibble would be that I didn't think the profanity was really appropriate for FaithWriters. A milder term would have worked equally well.
05/14/09
Yeah, Wally! He saw the light. What a wonderful story. The dialogue was done remarkably well. Congratulations on your well-deserved win.
05/16/09
I think comedy is about the hardest thing to write, but you did an excellent job!
Love your last line! I'm not a dog lover, but I do love that line.