The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow - powerful story. Great writing, you captivated me the whole way through. Very fitting ending - sad, but fitting with the story. The horrible part is that this story is true around the world.
05/12/09
Sad to think of this happening in the world. Good job.
05/13/09
I SO liked this. Partly because I live in Africa and what you have written could easily take place. I suspect your story is a little too devoid of hope for most people and you may drop a few points for that. But you sure leave the reader feeling VERY uncomfortable.
Feel free to PM me to talk further about this.
This one is a little to real -that hurts. But it left me wanting a different ending. Sometimes true to life hurts.