The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/09
Oh my goodness! I can't believe I am the first to comment on this entry. It is very comment-worthy.

I love the little nick names of the mom and the fun puns all along the journey through "wallet world". Very enjoyable read. Keep up the good words! ;)
05/11/09
Hilarious!
05/13/09
I also have a fifteen-year-old although when he goes into a shop he takes ages because he can never make his mind up!
Nicely done. I especially liked the reference to child slave labour.
Outstanding - I enjoyed it.
Really good voice, and a fun read. Thumbs up!