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05/10/09
Interesting characters to be sure. This must be a true story...otherwise I would find it hard to believe they were in a rollover without seatbelts and no one was injured. Even with that said, I still enjoyed the cruising.
05/11/09
This has a nostalgic feeling to it.

I did feel a bit squeamish--they were acting dangerously, and although they got away with it, I just wanted to shake a finger at them.

You did a good job showing the relationship between these two friends.