The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/09
This is the beginning of a delightful story! Great detail and sentiment. And the rest of the story is...?!

Your writing style easily moves one into your story. Touch up the punctuation and spacing of paragraphs for a more polished appearance.

I really am waiting for the rest of the story!
05/05/09
Lovely to read! I like Miles very much--there are so many hardworking men and women who are like this character.