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04/30/09
This was wonderful writing! Your descriptions were superb and the voice of your MC was so believable. Every character, Uncle Willy, the mother, the MC were described so perfectly that the reader should have no problem "seeing" them. I wonder why you are only in level 2 with the talent this piece displays. Two huge thumbs up!
I agree - why are you here? This was incredibly fun reading!! You tied it nicely at the end. What talent to make a funeral an enjoyable read! LOVED THE face down in beer nuts.
05/01/09
I really enjoyed your story. It left me wanting more. I not only felt that it was realistic but it actually felt like I was there with them. Very nice!
Really great writing.
05/07/09
Hi Charldene. I just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your 3rd place win in Level 2, and to let you know you also did extremely well overall, ranking 31st out of all the entries for the week.

It was a big week of entries, so you really did very well. If you would like to see the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=373619

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.
Again, well done. :-)

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)