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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Hard and Soft (04/23/09)

TITLE: Chains (ii)
By Nancy Higginson
04/25/09


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Cleaning out my training bag, untouched for over a year, I came across several choke chains in various sizes. I held these chains, tears filling my eyes, thinking of how hard training nearly ruined a wonderful dog and friend several years before.

As a teenager I dreamed of walking into the show ring, a dog at my heel, walking out with ribbons. Nearly thirty years later, finally having the time and money to really consider showing in performance events, I began my puppy search. I knew what breed I wanted, the rest was just my wish list. In my heart I wanted a specific color, a male pup between two and four months, double registry, and good bloodlines but with my budget I wasn‘t expecting to get those wants. An ad in the paper caught my eye - the price the breeder was asking had my expectations low but we went look at the two three month old pups she had left. The male was the color I wanted, and had double registry. He had been sold to a man in the military but the man was transferred to Hawaii and couldn’t take him. Now she needed homes for them that weekend so had cut her price in half. My pup came home with me that day. I did a pedigree search and discovered he even had the bloodlines I remembered from our previous dogs. His name means His Gift, as he truly is a gift from God.

I picked a dog training class that was close to my home. I had already done the basics with him on my own so we started in the novice class. He learned readily, I rarely had to correct my dog on the novice exercises. My dog had a tender heart, he was eager to please doing whatever I asked as long as he understood what I wanted. After we graduated novice we moved up to the open class. The exercises were harder here and the instructor could have given lessons to a drill sergeant. Your dog is too far out front, run the other way. Your dog is walking away and not looking at you, throw your throw chain at him. Your dog wants to drop the dumbbell, give him a sharp rap under the chin. The instructor would yell at me for not correcting my dog firmly or often enough. Training went from joy to misery for both of us. I dreaded the classes and my dog began cringing away from his leash. The hard training methods were destroying my dreams, and we needed to leave the class.

I worked on repairing my relationship with him, going out for fun, not training. We would go to the pet store, the local bookshops that allow dogs, and leisurely walks. One of our fun outings was to the Animal Fair, showcasing different animal groups in our area. There, I met a group that changed my thinking on dog training forever. I observed their demonstration with awe, seeing how happy the dogs looked, eager to please, and so focused on their masters. Their training classes were very reasonable and close to home, so we began again. We had a lot to unlearn and the softer, positive training methods to practice. Gone were choke chains, throw chains, the yelling, the corrections. We used soft collars, clickers, treats, gentle words. In very little time we found our joy again. My dog would run to me, wiggling all over, when I grabbed his leash, and joyfully jump into his crate when it was time to go. I was filled with happiness, watching him prance through the ring with his first ribbon in his mouth. We worked our way to a handful of ribbons and three titles before slowing down.

After eighteen months off training and nearly two years off showing, we are training again with an eye to the fall show season. I will never again put a chain on my dog, but I will keep these chains as a reminder. As I held them, I thought of the chains that once held me, and the Master who used His soft words and loving hands to train me. He threw away my chains. I pray I will be more like my dog, walking with my Master, running towards His voice, heeding His commands. May He never need to use hard training on me.


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Mary McLeary04/30/09
What a great story! I loved this take on the theme and the way you used it as a lesson for our walk with The Master. Very nice!
Charla Diehl 04/30/09
I liked your story and the tie in to your faith at the end. I think a little more "showing" instead of all "telling" would improve this piece and make it a bit more interesting. Good job though--keep writig.
Shelley Ledfors 05/04/09
I can really relate to the dog training part of this story. Positive methods make such a difference in a dog's attitude, doesn't it? And what a great comparison at the end to God. Nice piece.
Betty Castleberry05/06/09
This reads like a devotional.

I understand hard vs soft training methods well. My parrots do not respond well to discipline. They do much better with positive reinforcement.

As an animal lover, I really liked this. Thanks for sharing.
Mona Purvis05/06/09
As a dog lover, this rings so true to me. Dogs are like people...what works for one doesn't automatically work for another. Calm, assertive energy as The Dog Whisperer would say.
Mona
Beckie Stewart05/06/09
I like the way you used the dog training to then tie in your own relationship with the Lord. This was good. Being a new doggie owner, I liked this.
Deborah Porter 05/07/09
Hi Nancy. You may already know, but I just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your Highly Commended award in Level 2, and to let you know you also did extremely well overall, ranking 38th out of all the entries for the week.

It was a big week of entries, so you really did exceptionally well. If you would like to see the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?p=373619

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.
Again, well done. :-)

By the way, are you Rick's wife?

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Nancy Higginson05/07/09
Thank you all for the nice comments. This one is non-fiction, Shiloh and I just finished up another training class and will hopefully be in the show ring this fall.

And yes, I am Rick's (Hoomi's) wife.