The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/09
This is interesting in a quirky kind of way. It absolutely describes many hospital visits. The cure hurts worse than the illness. Liked your use of repetition.
Poor Kari. Sounds like she didn't find a solution to her extreme back pain either. This was well written and I sure wanted Kari to get her sedation!