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04/23/09
Hoping this piece will minister to those who need to hear the message.
I agree - this has the potential to minister to many with its unique insight. I like this kind of format of watching someone else grow and learn instead of a straight "preach." Very effective.
04/25/09
You did a nice job of opening the character up emotionally without draining the reader. The piece also reminded us that potential idols are everywhere if we don't put God first daily. Good job.
04/29/09
I'd love to know more about what drove her to counseling in the first place.
04/29/09
I'm so glad you ended this on a note of hope that Janice may finally find peace!
04/29/09
This is an honest portrayal of something many people deal with. You did a good job of showing hope.
04/29/09
Oh, how I love a piece with a beautiful message, well done! Your last line left my heart satisfied with hope.
04/29/09
This was heartbreaking and tender...nice job.