The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/05
Very nice entry--Thank you for sharing..For the readers, it would be easier to draw from if we space between the paragraphs. God bless ya, littlelight
08/07/05
A well written story. I enjoyed it. But, I would have left out "not bothering to check whether or not I had the correct bags." because it gives it away too soon. Space the paragraphs for an easier read.