The Official Writing Challenge
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08/03/05
Your story was really great, wonderful thoughts, well presented. It would have been so much easier for the readers if we space the paragraphs out. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story. God bless ya, littlelight
08/07/05
A good lesson for all of us. Spacing your paragraphs would make for an easier read.