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The message of hope for the one passing, but a message of pain for the ones left behind.
This is a little bit confusing. Two different people, right? It needs to be set off somehow so the readers can keep it straight.

This is very sad, especially because I have a Nik that is #31 on his high school baseball team. Very sad story.
For those outside California and especially the U.S., this is based on true facts that just happenend the week I wrote this. Nick Adenhart pitched his first game for our local Angels 30 minutes down the freeway from me and then within a few hours after the game, he and two friends were dead, a fourth critically injured by an alledged drunk driver running a red light. My best friend's daughter shared the dance/cheer team with the young girl who was driving, leading a prayer in her gymnasium for a memorial for Courtney. Please keep the surviving young man, Jon Wilhite in your prayers; his injuries still severe. He said his first word two days ago..."Mom."