The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting exploration of a mother-daughter relationship.

Consider editing some of your Elizabeth said and Karen said with other ways of writing dialogue--you can leave off the tag altogether, or use a description of the character's actions instead. Study some of the Master's entries to see how it's done.

This can make people think about their own stereotypes and preconceptions.
Good dialogue between mother and daughter about a tough subject.
Nice Inspiration. Good idea