The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/09
Interesting exploration of a mother-daughter relationship.

Consider editing some of your Elizabeth said and Karen said with other ways of writing dialogue--you can leave off the tag altogether, or use a description of the character's actions instead. Study some of the Master's entries to see how it's done.

This can make people think about their own stereotypes and preconceptions.
04/13/09
Good dialogue between mother and daughter about a tough subject.
Nice Inspiration. Good idea