The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
This was my favorite line:
A jewel-toned planet
flickering with life
flew like a clear high note
from the throat
of God.

Although I think this piece was a little light on the topic, I enjoyed it.
04/10/09
Oh, I caught the topic here loud and strong--excellent free verse poetry! Loved it!
I can't write free verse and usually don't understand it, but you actually got throught to me. I also loved that same part. Thankkkkks.
04/13/09
Lovely! A mighty lesson with so few words.
04/13/09
Simply beautiful, from the heights of God's grace to the depths of His cherished human race. You are a poet through and through.
04/14/09
I do horrible at writing free verse so I really appreciate it when someone does it with success. The words flowed beautifully to a glorious conclusion. Thoroughly enjoyed the powerful message it sends. You are a talented poet with a unique gift. Enjoy it!
04/14/09
I enjoyed this so much. You gain good control with words. Deep and very special.
Mona
04/16/09
Hurray!!! Movin' on up!
04/16/09
Congratulations! I'm glad to see you placed in the top three in this group. This was a well-deserved win!