The Official Writing Challenge
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Very entertaining voice, and good writing. Love the humor.

I thought the topic was weak-ish, and this is a story that has become almost a cliche...nevertheless, you made it quite fresh with your approach. Well done.
Very similar to a country music hit I've heard, but well written with good humor. I like the ending. Next time, try picking a unique topic and watch the accolades!
Loved your style. Little girls do need loving daddies to watch out for them. Fun read.
Out of step as I often am, I thought you wove the topic in with refreshing subtlety, and liked the unique voice you brought to this classic scene. It made me smile and chuckle, having the comfort of a favorite pair of slippers.
P.S. I loved the title. It held the perfect note of intrigue.