The Official Writing Challenge
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04/10/09
Great alliteration in your title, which fits your piece perfectly.

This was a bit light on topic, perhaps.

Blessings on your family!
You have written a nice story event. It brought to mind my own daughter's first childbirth. Nostalgic.(sigh)
04/13/09
I appreciate the wisdom in this piece. Good job