The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/05
Oooh, a bit chilling since it is the reality and destiny of many. Liked the dialog and the truth of this piece. Nicely done.
08/03/05
I hear ya! Good entry, good dialogue..very nice! God bless ya, littlelight
Fast-paced and well thought out. Enjoyed it. Keep writing.
08/06/05
I enjoyed this piece. Good job. Your clear, concise dialog told a very discriptive story. Keep up the great work.
08/07/05
A well written example.
08/07/05
What a chilling line, "Your destiny is your destination."
I enjoyed the dialogue and had no problem knowing who was speaking when. Yes, those who did not accept the passport may be very confused, and how horrible that they will understand too late!
Ohhhh, I like this. Great tempo and truth.
08/08/05
Your piece flows really well, David. The ecomonical dialogue tells the reader all they need to know. This would work equally well as a skit. Well done.