The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/05
Inspirational poem, beautifully written! "Very Well Done"
08/02/05
I always enjoy a good poem! Nicely done. :)
08/02/05
Very nicely written poetry. Good examples.
God bless ya! littlelight
08/07/05
A nicely written poem, but what about Jesus? All the things listed are good, but without Him, they won't get you to heaven. Maybe it could be covered in
"Obeying Godís voice
Your passport to heaven

Loving God by choice
Your passport to heaven"
11/16/06
Isn't it nice to get comments regarding your poem? That's how I feel, also. So, instead of advertising on my poetry entries - I sure would appreciate "comments" instead. Good or bad...but Comments, Ok? Thanks.
11/16/06
PS: You could put your Ad in your profile if you like. And, God Bless.