The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the way you brought the resurrection thought in the parachute jump. Very clever. Only suggestion on your story would be to space between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
04/10/09
Hey, I LOVE the last name of your family!

They learned a great lesson, but there's NO lesson that would induce me to ride a ride like that.

An extra space between paragraphs would be helpful, please.

Nice story.
Good Piece. Nice Inspiration