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Some of your wording in the beginning threw me slightly off but I loved the whole them and twist regarding her account...just shows that we never know what will happen next! Good!!
I could definitely feel her frustration!

Not sure about the topic here, but I hope your character learns her lesson.
Been there! I hope she learned about being a good caretaker in the world she just shut out! Cute.
Nice Illustration. It really portrays what happens out there