The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Lots of great imagery in this allegory!

I found it a little bit hard to follow in spots--it rambled a bit, and the lack of spacing made it difficult to read.

Nevertheless, it had a wonderful tone and atmosphere--thanks for this entry.
This was neat. I too became confused in some parts, but like the take on the subject and the pictures that formed in my head as I read.
04/09/09
I liked your story. That is one great encounter!
Bless You. The story was quit discursive. IF you had put the ending at the beginning, them I would have known it was all a (Hopeful) dream, smile.