The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/05
I can't believe this is already Friday and I am the first one to leave a comment on this charming story! It was very well written and a joy to read! "Nicely Done"
08/06/05
You wrapped it all up together nicely, bringing back the image of the little girl :)
08/08/05
I love the way you describe yourself, can totally identify with the 'phobias'. Also like the way you tie the spiritual/secular pp/journey images together in the last paragraph. This is an energetic story that kept my interest right thorough to the end. Well done. Yeggy