The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This was really powerful! I was sucked in by your wording and held there. I love the reference to the sword that had never left her hand. I think this is excellent writing!
04/09/09
I love your phrases like "entering down" and "the bottom of down". Great poetic skills.
Great poem showing the contrast of the struggles of life but the hope in Jesus.
Beautiful.Well done
04/09/09
A lot said in so few words. Good job.