The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/09
Reads like a song--definitely needs to be put to music!
04/09/09
I thought this was great. I was moved. I think that's key when writing poems/songs. Others need to be moved by the words!
This is a great poem and a great reminder that greater is He that is in us then He that is in the world.
04/09/09
Really encouraging. Thanks for the reminder too.
04/13/09
I hope you have a melody to go with this. I liked the steady pattern.
This is awesome!