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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY Share Tweet how it works   Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate) Topic: Passport (07/25/05) TITLE: Open Door By Vasyl Dmytriv 07/26/05  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  ADD TO MY FAVORITES Just let me in I am the resident of this Kingdom I may show to you my PASSPORT Just le me in. I have the rights to be a citizen Because I became a legal citizen by the law In Kingdom's principality that has own rules And I would like to stand before the face of Ruler. Let me in ... this pasport has a price No transfer right, no duplication, no easy ways... Just let me in ... I want to see the King. I chose this way ... because of kingdom's promises I will live life of eternity I presence of King's family. PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com. If you died today, are you absolutely certain that you would go to heaven? You can be right now. CLICK HERE JOIN US at FaithWriters for Free. Grow as a Writer and Spread the Gospel. This article has been read 527 times Member Comments Member Date Debra Bowers 08/01/05 This was well written, but gave me the impression that you were angry. Was that what you were going for? You do have talent and I would love to read more of your poetry. Nina Phillips 08/02/05 I get from this that you have faith in the promise of God. Just had to go over it again one more time. Nice entry. God bless ya, littlelight Shari Armstrong  08/06/05 The title didn't seem to go with the poem -it seemed like the door was closed, and you had to ask to get it open? Deborah Porter  08/08/05 Vasyl, I'm afraid this entry was too far under the minimum word count allowed for Challenge entries to be included in the judging for the Passport challenge. The minimum allowed is 150 words, and your entry came in at just 105. I am so sorry that you had to miss out, but we have the limits for a reason and need to enforce them to make it fair for everyone. I hope you'll keep entering the Challenge, but just keep the limits in mind when you do - 150 words minimum and 750 words maximum. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)

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