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03/20/09
This is an excellent Biblical re-telling--one of the best I've read on this site.
Excellent piece of writing. Well done.
03/21/09
This was an amazing, beautiful piece of writing. I LOVE the perspective of a lesser known, much lesser thought of Biblical character; you did a wonderful job of giving the young scribe a face. Great title, too. Excellent.
03/26/09
Congratulations on your highly commended. This is an excellent re-telling of a Bible character. Very good writing.
03/26/09
Very nicely done. No edits, nothing to point out to work on, just a great entry. thank you.
Thanks for your note. Congrats on your highly recommended.
03/28/09
Dorothy,

"Wisdom blew, like a faint breeze disturbing a thin veil."

Now that's spiritually sensitive poetry.

Remarkable piece of writing.