The Official Writing Challenge
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I teach young men with very little to inspire them in their lives, so I appreciate this.

It may be a bit weak on the topic for this week, and the ending seemed to fizzle off just a bit.

I hope there are actual programs like this!
What I liked about this was the way it plays with some of the golden cows of racist language and attitude.
I too liked the positive expression of kingdom values, though the topic was hard to detect.
Good entry. I felt the ending tried to pack a punch to close the deal but it just didn't work for me. That aside, there is a great deal in the body of this piece that shows a voice behind the page very capable of engaging readers.