The Official Writing Challenge
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Well told story. Very good images of good and evil.
Keep writing.
03/20/09
This is a GREAT story. What imagination, what detail, what suspense! I was totally sucked in. And what a beautiful finish. Well done! I see a novel somewhere in your future...
03/21/09
Outstanding descriptions!
03/26/09
Congratulations on your 1st place. This is very well written. The detailed descriptions make this a compelling read. Great job.
03/26/09
Congrats...good descriptions and creativity in weaving this story together. the ending didn't work for me as the story took a very literal view of eschatology and yet the ending doesn't seem to keep true to that view. regardless, it was good writing and congratulations.
03/27/09
Thanks again for writing an excellent story. You have a wonderful imagination.
Nice story! Great Inspiration!! Well done!!! Keep up the good work.
04/06/09
Great story, Josiah, and well written. Congratulations on another win.
You had many great details but when dealing with so many it can lead to mistakes. As a nic-picking ex-military - the B-36 only had six engines (but a good pick for the nuclear bomb plane as it was the first aircraft capable of carrying one fully enclosed within the aircraft). Might have been better to deliver it via missile and not have the enemies so close - zap, they're gone too.
Keep writing, you have real talent.