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Beautifully put prose and allusions. Your descriptions not only puts the reader right there in the heart of Africa, but enables them as well to see the writer's heart.
03/12/09
Love that last line.
03/12/09
Well done. I can feel the great waterfall. I love the last line.
03/12/09
This is beautiful. I felt as if I was standing right there with you!
03/12/09
This is beautiful. I felt as if I was standing right there with you!
03/12/09
This is a beautiful description of the splendor of Africa and of course the Glory of God! Yet even this recount only hints at the majesty of both. I really wish you could have gone on and said a bit more about both wonders, possibly mentioning the African name "Mosi-oa-Tunya". Keep up with the evocative writing.
I love the word pictures in the first paragraph of the mist of ancient waters, and a wisp of humanity. Nicely Done!
This was so beautiful. what I was reminded of actually was God Himself; His mighty power and strength and his constant movement in our lives, and the still small voice that floats within us with gentleness and unconditional love transforming us into a precious gem. thank you.
I loved the imagery here.
03/15/09
Very descriptive, I felt like I was getting wet in the last paragraph. Good writing!
03/16/09
I was touched by your poetic word picture at the end. The waterfall, butterfly, mist, the creation of the Lord, etc. Beautifully done.