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Thanks for this story, it's amazing how more and more people in the Far East are beginning to accept Jesus as their Lord and Saviour.
03/06/09
Great story! I love how you show that a whole family (not just adults) can work together to demonstrate Christ to the community!
03/07/09
For the Gospel to penetrate the Japanese culture and traditions has taken many, many years. Slowly but surely, the living demonstration of Christ's love through His people has had its impact. Good story.
Lifestyle evangelism; I loved that. Overall this story was a great encouragement to live the life pleasing to Christ and others watching will hear what you preach.
Great job.
Everything is here for a very compelling story - you have chronicled everything in a very concise way. What I would have liked to have seen, and this is only my opinion, is to take a smaller segment of the story - a pivotal moment - expressed in dialogue between the characters, showing, not telling of their conflicts and ultimate choice.