The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story. Well done
03/06/09
You did a very good job of showing the exploitation in this country. I'm not quite sure that I followed what was meant to be happening with the different characters, but the China presentation was very well done.
03/06/09
You did a very good job of showing the exploitation in this country. I'm not quite sure that I followed what was meant to be happening with the different characters, but the China presentation was very well done.
I totally had these characters pictured in my mind by your descriptions. I would have liked to have known the beginning of the relationship and how she finds God personally. This could be a continuing story. Great job
What a beautiful story. Well written. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing.
03/06/09
You had me hooked. I would like to read more!
Wonderful story. I was captivated, and could "see" every detail.
You definitely have a talent for descriptive writing and creating atmosphere! You are able to flesh-out your characters in very short order as well - not an easy task!
I wasn't too sure where the story was going, but liked the writing well enough to continue through to the end where the conclusion was well-worth the read.