The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/09
Bold and honest. It's sad that those conditions exist.
Very thought provocking. Well done.
It is sad that situations like that still exist today. How blessed we are to be able to worship without fear of reprisal. Thank you for a very true story.
03/06/09
I like that you used one subject and many perspectives. Well done.
I liked the different POV's you pointed out.
Four very different viewpoints of one same country; it brings individualism to a country lacking in that freedom. Though some may have to wait for their heavenly rewards, no doubt their faith will further the kingdom. This was very powerful, Thanks.
You certainly are able to express the differing points of view well. Very insightful and and informative. To me, to make the piece more engaging and intriguing to read, I would have liked to have seen real characters discussing their positions in dialogue. I'm sure that that would be difficult to do in just 750 words, but with the talent shown in this piece, I think it could be done.