The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/05
That was really kinda cute the way you gave yourself, hubby, kids titles befitting the roles. Very neat. God bless ya, littlelight
An entertaining commentary sandwiched between, "It was time" (your lead sentence) and "The rest is just details" (your final sentence)! While some of the parentheses seemed necessary, I wondered if some could have been avoided (and commas used, instead) for a smoother flow? A fun read!
08/02/05
Amy, I actually started to feel a little car sick just thinking about your set up and position in the family car. I enjoyed reading your story very much and wanted to pop in quickly and let you know that it actually made it into the semi-finals for the Car Trip challenge. So be encouraged - you did well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)