The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 632 times
Member Comments
Very touching. I found myself anticipating the MC receipt of the letter, to share her joy.
What a lovely story! Very touching, and the use of present tense is quite effective.
Awesome story and very touching.
Well done on an excellent entry.
Nice expression of the MC's anticipation. :)
Lovely story! Very compelling to read and I agree that the present tense makes this story come alive.
well written! too bad you couldn't have written more! I wanted to know how it ended.
Great job.
Very moving. You conveyed the tension and pain in the family very well. I thought the ending was perfect. There was a small typo; I think you meant 'blond hairED.' Try reading your entry aloud to yourself to catch these little errors. But it doesn't detract from what is a very well-written story.
I like how you built suspense in thss story. I was not aware that the Germans also invaded Oslo. Very interesting.