The Official Writing Challenge
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Very touching. I found myself anticipating the MC receipt of the letter, to share her joy.
02/26/09
What a lovely story! Very touching, and the use of present tense is quite effective.
Awesome story and very touching.
Well done on an excellent entry.
Norms
Nice expression of the MC's anticipation. :)
03/01/09
Lovely story! Very compelling to read and I agree that the present tense makes this story come alive.
03/02/09
well written! too bad you couldn't have written more! I wanted to know how it ended.
Great job.
03/02/09
Very moving. You conveyed the tension and pain in the family very well. I thought the ending was perfect. There was a small typo; I think you meant 'blond hairED.' Try reading your entry aloud to yourself to catch these little errors. But it doesn't detract from what is a very well-written story.
I like how you built suspense in thss story. I was not aware that the Germans also invaded Oslo. Very interesting.